Leafless Poetry

I am not sure if it is finished or not. Any criticism? Please!
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"Leafless Poetry"
By Joe C.

Lying over the covers as our
leafless coverings
embrace with each other
second after second.
your breath clouds our dark surrounding.

the sinuous chesnut hair from above you
parades my face
while the aroma of a colorful
bouquet fills my lungs.

the melodic sounds from
my old bumbper sticker covered
boombox stereo
harmonize with the din of you and I
as the palatable bang
that fills a once vapid tongue
develops into savory bliss